The Tree

The tree creaked, cracked, and blew in the gusting storm. It moaned and groaned under the harsh onslaught of the storm. The emerald coloured leaves fell like raindrops, and scattered across the forest floor. The tree’s demise was near, all it had weathered and seen running the risk of being lost. With one final strike of the gale, it fell…


2 thoughts on “The Tree

  1. Connor this is very impressive use of adjectives in description. As I read this I feel as though I am in the middle of the storm and I can actually see and hear the tree struggling to survive. You do a great job of expressing the age and condition of the tree without using those common adjectives that are often given when describing trees. Well done! I love the alliteration and onomatopoeia in the first sentence!

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